Can you please examine the following text and provide constructive criticism on its grammar (read on)?

within in the guidelines of the English language?


This is part of a CV (you may also put your personal opinion) Should I write it the way I did?


Under Personal Profile: I wrote





# Serious/ fun / energetic /quick witted %26amp; friendly





and under one of the job role I wrote:


鈥?First point of contact for all our members


鈥?Responsible for managing and directing all incoming calls


鈥?Dealing with face to face enquiries


鈥?Controlling access into the club


鈥?Operating and balancing the register


鈥?Issuing membership cards and receipts





Can you make it flows better? or What do you think?|||I would say leave out the word fun because it will imply that you fool around, change it to...





Energetic and friendly





Dont use "quick witted" because they would think you were a smart ars*e|||Although "enquiries" is an accepted alternate spelling, it is usually "inquiries." (At least in the US; UK might be different)|||Energetic, friendly, quick learner, team player.





I'd leave out the serious, fun and quick witted. As noted in another answer, it's spelled inquiries in the US.





Good Luck